Essaie Practise

INTRODUCTION

- Hook : Do you thing the sport is better than physical éducation.
- Thesis : Change Physical éducation with lacross have many advantage.

BODY

ARGUMENT 1
Topic sentence : The teeager been more active.
Supporting idea : In this sport you must run, shoot and you can get in touch with your adversary.

ARGUMENT 2
Topic sentence : The teenager got more friends.
Supporting sentence : This sport it's a team sport and you must be friendly whit your team mate.

CONCLUSION
Insight : the teenager been in good shape.
Extension : Why not doing sport at lunch time whit teacher.